Cool for a first try, what i would improve:
-Finding vocals
-Bass is offkey(?) and not distorded enough (phonk has that very distinct distorded bass in the bg most of the time)
-melody is very repetitive and gets boring really quick
-percussions are ok but they're just looping for the entire drop, i would add some variety to spice it up
Overall, it's a good try but it definitely needs some work
Yeah, this is definitely NOT GOOD - when I made this I tried to keep the same style as the original (its just unfortunate that the original is even worse). For the bass I used one of the samples from GarageBand itself (the 808 bass), it was the best one I could find and it definitely doesn't fit, so I might need to find some samples elsewhere for the bass, and maybe use more than one. I've made a few unreleased "phonk" (if you could even call it that) songs where the melody changes occasionally but it just sounded odd and so I never released those, and the percussions are definitely not as good as they could be.
Thanks for the feedback though, and hopefully I can improve my songs :D
holy that bass is godly
I will ruin ir for you, imagine fart sounds xd.. now unhear it
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